是,it is a good idea to switch the last two paragraphs, that makes more sense. 再谢!
是,it is a good idea to switch the last two paragraphs, that makes more sense. 再谢!
• 是的,倒一下承上启下更紧些。很喜欢这首诗! -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/22/2011 postreply 00:45:35
• 谢谢曲师喜欢并指点!~~ 祝节日快乐! -遍野- ♀ (50 bytes) () 12/22/2011 postreply 07:49:38