构思很好,语句还可凝练含蓄一些。个见。
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• 是,谢谢指点!是有些多余的字要去掉。 -zhaozijun- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/25/2010 postreply 14:35:00
• 是,谢谢指点!是有些多余的字要去掉。 -zhaozijun- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/25/2010 postreply 14:35:00
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