临窗听晚蝉,--〉按新韵1)首句平起入韵式的话,听出律。2)平起不入韵式,则蝉出律。说错勿怪!
声远影只单。
不竞鹂音美,
因从此处安。
• 回复:格律退步了,按古韵根本不是五绝,新韵也不对~ -Hope_Hope- ♂ (218 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 10:31:49
• 赐教不敢,等下回家和你一手。 -没下雨- ♂ (27 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 10:38:34
• 要带蝉/禅的哟! -Hope_Hope- ♂ (54 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 10:53:44
• 蝉参禅 一首[打油词] 贴楼上了 -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 11:26:35
• 三禅呢! -Hope_Hope- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 11:32:58
• 不能含糊:)同乐~~ -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 11:38:25
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