Valentines Day (图)

Valentines Day 
         by my daughter (4th grade)

The tasty little Valentines tarts,
The mushy cards with lots of hearts.
The little candy that says "Be Mine!"
People with cards and waiting in line.
Passing my cards out one by one,
Come on! Let's have some fun!
Waiting for someone to give me hearts,
Getting a flower with thorns like darts!
Don't forget to clean the floor,
Now let's get out of the door!

所有跟帖： 

• 写得有真情实感！还挺Rhyming，小姑娘有诗才！ -tianduan114- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2009 postreply 21:40:39

• 谢谢夸奖！ -宋一民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 08:22:27

• 写得很好！很喜欢。 -豪放亦婉约- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2009 postreply 23:09:11

• 谢谢你喜欢！ -宋一民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 08:23:01

• 真羡慕那份天真，那份自然朴素的诗心！不知胜于多少成人。 -雨清- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2009 postreply 23:52:35

• 蒙雨清夸奖不胜荣幸！你是我崇拜的诗人！ -宋一民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 08:25:03

• 顶顶牛滴帖子～ -点点儿- ♀ (104 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 05:43:34

• 谢谢点点儿赠诗！收藏了！ -宋一民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 08:26:46

• 哈，晕S～～～ -点点儿- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 14:20:11

• 将门出虎女，让人垂涎！ -XiaoLinchuan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 08:39:22

• 顶个。。。！ -苏茉儿- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 10:09:12

• 朗朗上口～ -Eragon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 12:16:41

• 童趣十足。 -渭原- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 13:53:46

• 一民兄好! 好有童趣的小诗, 快乐的小童年~ -clearskies- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 14:02:02

• 遗传的好诗才 -sunshine814- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/11/2009 postreply 19:08:26