The spring flowers light the light in you
Up from the silence a sound wakes
The water grows eyes to see your eyes
The rose emits fragrance to smell your smell
Only the waves of winds, come and go
Carry your soul
The spring flowers light the light in you
Up from the silence a sound wakes
The water grows eyes to see your eyes
The rose emits fragrance to smell your smell
Only the waves of winds, come and go
Carry your soul
• 咦,很有味道啊。。。。你现写的吗?太厉害了!:) -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 12:54:24
• 刚读完无忧的诗写的。音文诗:不明觉厉 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 12:57:03
• 最后两句就是你原诗的意境啊,不是吗? -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 12:59:24
• 是啊,所以觉得你有才,把诗领悟透了,然后张口就甩出英文诗了。。。。LOL -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 13:06:12
• 这本该是来夸你的诗的哈。林木不知道跑哪里去了,也不来热闹一下 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 13:09:18
• 谢谢邻兄。:)原创不是别的坛啊,灌水要适可而止。。。:) -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 13:14:36
• 二位老师周六下午好~^。。 -青松站- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 13:09:01
• 青妹真的最体贴人意,走到哪里把春天明快带到哪里 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 13:11:15
• 刚在唱坛..,2020的冬天老师-.在唱无忧老师的歌...刚刚在想唱就唱..刚刚~^ -青松站- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 13:16:25
• 对不起.,.邻兄..刚只顾听冬天老师唱歌了~~^ -青松站- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2021 postreply 17:27:22