很中肯。这篇小说写得太急，缺少铺垫。但我还是很尊重作者的辛勤笔耕和虚怀若谷的态度

来源: Respecturopinion 于 2015-09-13 17:22:05 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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