不是针对你的故事，而是想起我很喜欢的一句话：Don't mistake a good setup

Don't mistake a good setup for a satisfying conclusion -- many beginning writers end their stories when the real story is just ready to begin. ~ Stanley Schmidt

我自己就时常有这种感觉，写了好多章了才发现，我终于明白了自己这个故事是要表达什么