我觉得从旁观者角度写人物，恐怕需要多一点的对话？不然揭示主角内心世界真的很有难度。加油！

来源: 可能成功的P 于 2022-04-30 07:51:09 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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