还好没有漏下这个帖 my two cents ...

Job hunting: /b/要失去爆破。

62. Are you hiring right now?
Hiring /hai uh ring/: -- ‘uh’ ‘呃’音没读出来；

71. I graduated at the top of my class from Harvard Law School.
I graduated: /-itid/

72. Your business has a very good reputation
‘business’ /biz ni s/ ; ‘in business law’ is well read.

73. I am very responsible and will work long hours to make sure that my work
‘am’ 读完这个词后，嘴不要张开（闭着），紧接着读下面的词。Will 不要读成WE；

‘that’的 ‘th’音要读出来；/t/要失去爆破，其元音弱读成schwa。

74. I believe that you are just the kind of person：
believe /bili:v/, not /biliv/;  ‘the kind of’ is not read good.
(后两句‘that’和‘you’ 连读成ch音，like ‘Ch-air'; 同时其元音弱读成schwa。 ‘th’音要读出来, 你好象都漏掉了。