重新探討第三﹐四句譯法

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孤舟簑笠翁, 獨釣寒江雪。
A little boat, a bamboo cloak, [孤舟﹐不是little boat﹔笠﹐漏譯]
An old man fishing in the cold river-snow.


照此譯法﹐BOAT和CLOAK﹐不確定與下面翁的關係。而原文裡﹐翁披簑戴笠。第四句
中又漏譯“獨”。所以﹐這樣譯較妥﹕

On a single boat,an old man with bamboo cloak and hat,

Fishing alone in the snow on the cold river.