你的人物对话写的栩栩如生，这一章节里还有许多的中英诗歌，写的真好。

王安石的《梅花》翻译的好精彩。


墙角数枝梅，凌寒独自开。

遥知不是雪，为有暗香来。

 

At a wall corner some plum trees grow,

Alone against cold white blossoms blow.

Aloof one knows they aren't the snow,

As faint through air soft fragrances flow.