hahaman，你写的太美了，but

writing follows orwell's rules。 u used metaphor/simile to impress me, and to touch my heart. hahaha...joking.
your writing is so beautiful, indeed.

the gist of Orwell 's article , people use language improperly, mainly applies to political and and economic areas. 你的诗歌如果follow这些rules，将会多么boring：）