88 queen 来了,多谢指正。.
第一条,全盘接纳。
第二条,改成 The first time we met Ben, he struck us favourably as a spirited young man who loves playing piano from the bottom of his heart.
第三条,你的顺多了,就它了。
第四条,google了一下,好象还是please don't hesitant, 但我经常看到 don't be hesitant 这种用法,哪位大拿出来定夺一下?