我写的这个东西是＂诗＂么？

来源: 于 2010-02-19 19:41:36 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

=== My cape of many dreams ===

I drifted off into daydreams......
There were blue leaves, crystal trees, and pink sunbeams
阿美 jumped cross green streams,
with a cape on her shoulders of many dreams...

这算诗么？哈哈～我的处女作！欢迎大家砸！