非常好!

来源: 于 2010-01-26 18:04:42 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

这么长的一篇文章读得那么流利很不容易。断句和节奏都很好。

你不介意的话,我就鸡蛋里挑骨头了.说得不对的地方，你多包涵。

BOOk is a little bit exaggerated. I think /u/ can be shorter.
SAY sounds like /se/, Webster is /sei/ but it is also ok /se/ in Southern

RUles somehow sounds like /roule/

ContrOl somewhat sounds like /k3ntru:l/ which I think it should be /k3ntroul/.

The stress of Otherwise is in the second syllable which I think it should be the first one.

Just my two cents.