to improve wriiting in English, you better write in English

if you keep wriiting this way, you will fnd out that your mind always translate English into Chinese before you master what English words are. To improve English speaking/writing skills, you need to read and write in English, and you need to get rid of the unnecessary phase of the language translation. In real life, you have no time to translate what you hear into Chinese and come up answers in Chinese and and translate them back into English. You must take English as input and react it in English.