Great writing!

Great story even I don't understand why people are so crazy about shooting a ball into holes with a stick. Hehe.

I noticed that there might be two grammatical negligence:

What he was going to loose anyway? --> What was he going to LOSE anyway?

...,although my male friends totally not understand this remark. --> ..., although my male friends totally DOn't get this remark.

Hope you don't mind. BTW, Tiger's wife is so sexy. Very jealous. I should have tried it with a bamboo stick and a ball when I was a child. Too late...