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来源: 于 2009-08-14 19:26:29 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

Just some catches for you:

1. proverb should be rhymed wirh property with the stress on the first syllable.
2. world

This one is on the edge: singer. (not a [g])

A tough one for you to improve yourself: the ending [d] sound should not add a schwa into it.