last feedback on your recording, good luck

1. The vowl uh (drug, come, gun,etc) are pronounced as the vowl u in buy; Especially gun, it sounded weird;
2. bought pronounced wrong;
3. "communities", the end s dropped;
3. "spreading" "spr" isn't pronounced properly;
4. The pace is pretty good, but lots of unstressed non-content words stressed too much.