【德利五言 一语试译】春诗- “思” 之 英语试译

【德利五言 一语试译】春诗- “思” 之 英语试译

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8:50 PM 5/15/2009

People, no mater who they are, like to write about spring and flowers etc, Bloggers are same. More than often you come cross a little piece of writing that touches your heart deeply. Quite a lot of them are very emotional. I do sometimes. I wrote one piece of so called Spring Poem in imitating the ancient style normally sentenced in 7 characters this spring.

But I am not sure of it since those poems requires very good skills in rhythms which strictly formatted. So I send a letter to one of my Bloggering friends who had many years writing and translating poetry. Other than the adivse given on the poem, I was also given reading his poem in five charaters what we called "五言“.

It's so neat. I can not go away without trying to give the English version. Here it is. Hope you may enjoy it! It could be a nice read, and won't wasting your time: 

一语湖边

《思》

 

一春又一春，

无日不思君；

不信抬头问，

南风知我心。

宋德利   
2005年5月14 日

 Spring comes year after year,

My heart stays as a day ticks away,my dear,

I whispered softly as breeze in spring morning...air freshened n' clear

"Let southern winds brings me close to you dear... n' nearer

 

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* n' = and 弱读，

一语 试译
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9:02 AM 5/15/2009

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	Photograph from 地球抽象图 WenxueCity.com

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春意湖边

A maple leaf O'er the water,

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Noted by 一语湖边 

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