回复：dark joke, but I can't help but laugh

来源: 于 2009-01-15 21:38:23 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

Nice job!

I think sometimes, you did not say /e/ in lexus and "left" well. Just my two cents:)

Please let me know if you find anything I can improve;)