第二个稍改一下可以压韵，见内

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Moon set, Crows caw, frost fills the sky，

 

Sleeping with worries, accompanied by river maples and fishing light.

 

Outside Gusu City, the Cold Mountain Temple，

 

Its peal reaches travel's boat at the midnight.