名诗，好译！ 我给个也许形式上些许靠近点儿的version:

枫桥夜泊

Docked at Maple Bridge Overnight

----- 唐  张继

 

月落乌啼霜满天，

The Moon no more, rooks cawing, the sky filled with an icy fog。

江枫渔火对愁眠。

River maple, fishing lantern, tossing and turning; in sorrow lost。

姑苏城外寒山寺，

Gusu City, in its suburb, the Temple of Hanshan there looming。

夜半钟声到客船。

Midnight, temple bell, its ringing reaching this boat at the dock。