Dust Is it a haiku? Didn't intend to write a haiku

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Dust


A stirring of dust
Dancing in the air
Tells me in light we trust
© 8 days ago


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Likes: O Amante, Jenny Middleton, Moss M. Jacques

Jenny Middleton - I like how visual your haiku is XX and there is a lovely sense of positivity about the ending.2 days ago 

 

O Amante - Simple, short and yet it packs so much elegance and details. I could see the dust dancing in the air.

Amazing!