试改陶先生的诗唱《Country road》

【前叙】今得闲, 遂入城坛. 欣读陶陶三先生之雅诗《Country Road》一文, 心悦. 不才顽性忽起, 图一时之快, 依原诗格局改之, 译之, 吟之. 吾才学有限, 恐文中有不符之意, 望陶陶三先生海涵.

 

 

走在乡间的小路上

小呀小路上

挽着亲爱的妈妈

聊起了老爸

我问她花季时节

为何爱上我爸

妈妈笑意盈满脸颊

娇羞像云霞

她说爸爸才艺出众

笛子吹得很牛

声声环绕家乡的阁楼

山里山外情意悠

声声环绕家乡的阁楼

山里山外情意悠

 

译文如下：

Walking down a country road

a narrow rugged trail

Arm in arm with my dear Mama

We talked about my Papa 

I asked when she was an adolescent girl

how they fallen in love thorough

Mother smiled all over her cheeks, 

shying like a rosy cloud

She said Papa has the talented skill

and plays the flute very cool

The sound surrounds the village loft

So sultry all the mountains know