about the last two lines
"最后一句她很明显地表示,下次再见面她应该不会再搭理他了。这个将他dismiss掉的意思似乎没有完全翻译出来。"
I INDICATED that the speaker does not want to see the man in the translation. The original lines deliver the intention indirectly and I kept that indirectness in my translation. I think some times it is better to leave some rooms for the reader to wonder.