Thank for the comments. Could you shed more light? Treat me as
I like to take this chance to learn more. So please be specific. The whole translation may be a bad work. Let's start with the apparent mistakes and shortcomings and we can work from bottom up.
I like to ask whoever are interested in English poem translation to join this discussion and to share your knowledge.
Thank Xiaoman again.
I like to ask whoever are interested in English poem translation to join this discussion and to share your knowledge.
Thank Xiaoman again.