提个意见

前半部分读得不准确的几个地方：

长元音读成了断元音了： deeply: ['di?pli] not ['dipli]
吞音了： "motions" vs. "emotions".
元音读错了： moment: ['mo?m?nt] not ['mum?nt]
元音读错了： "living my dream" or "leaving my dream"? It sounds like "leaving my dream"
吞音了： strategies: /-te-/ is missed.
吞音了： of a doubt 读成了 of doubt
轻辅音读成浊辅音了： assist: [?'s?st] not [?'z?st]