忍不住，改了几笔，使译文在形式上更接近原文，使月亮......

忍不住，改了几笔，使译文在形式上更接近原文，使月亮从左上角被一溜烟地带到右下角消失了

By Li Shen
       
The pale moon
Mirrored in a pond
Was so tranquil that even
The visiting wind kept quiety
And was soon carried away by a bird
 
 
秋月

月儿苍白
对镜于池塘
一切如此静谧
来访的风儿也不响
俄顷，一只飞鸟驼走了月亮