楼主对海老师的总体评价极为中肯。

比如这一句：
“東風不與周郎便﹐銅雀春深鎖二喬。
If the east wind didn’t do young Zhou a favor,
Both Qiao girls’d be locked in Brass-Sparrow Terrace in deep spring.”
从诗人描述的历史事实看，这两句英文应为过去虚拟语气，应为hadn't done....would have been locked，而不是didn't...would be。