Some points for discussion

1.      jellies covered =>  jelly-covered

2.      --to study   =>  - study

3.      chat => chatted

4.       beat=> bit

5.      promised to myself => promised myself

6.      over tired => so tired

7.      I sort of stuck here like between a rock and a hard place => what is a “hard place”?

8.      being helpless and ending up sitting here typing, nagging like an old nanny again => feeling helpless, ending up...nagging

9.      I am thirsty like a bone =>  this is the first time I hear “thirsty like a bone”. I am not sure if there is such a phrase, but a research is needed on this one.

10.   On the way walking toward my dining room for some water something almost tripped me => On my way to dining room for some water, something almost tripped me.

11.   my chocolate are all gone => you keep using “chocolate” singular form, sorry, can’t change now.