发一篇作文，请这里的哥哥姐姐们给仔细改改

 

我也发一个正经学习帖吧。

 

这是弟弟写得比较好的一篇，我未经他的同意发在这里，请大家出手相助一把。里面简单的语法错误我指出来后他已经改过（但恐怕还有错），有些用词我实在也没有高招，因为我自己词汇量也有限。大家闲着也是闲着，帮个忙吧！

 

                                                       Climbing Mountain Hua

 

When I looked down to my feet, a kind of fright struck me. I saw that I was on the half way to a vertical cliff. People on the bottom of the mountain looked like ants. I felt my legs began to shake. I couldn’t help holding on the banister tightly by the side of the way to the top of the mountain. At that time I wanted to give up climbing the mountain, but I couldn’t do it. Because the way to the bottom is even more dangerous, the only thing I can do was to calm myself down and continue to finish the way left. After a deep breath, I didn’t see the steps I had walked any more and only kept on climbing. Then I got to the end of the steep steps a few minutes later. When I stood on the end of the steps and looked back to the way I walked, I felt a great sense of achievement. The dread was replaced by joy of accomplishment quickly.

 

   That was what I experienced on the way to get the top of mountain Hua. Sometimes what we are facing looks like a mountain that is difficult to climb. It will make us feel scared and don’t want to try anything except escaping. The difficulty is just a thing which looks terrible. If we have the courage to face it, it will be nothing hard. So when you feel dread, what you need to do is just close your eyes and keep moving, everything will be OK.