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I would say even the orginal english text can be re-worded to make it sound more smooth.

Per Food and Agricultural Organization's report, in developing countries, women makes up 40% of its agriculture labor force, however, only 10% - 20% of them own the land they farm, and to buy better seeds and fertilizer, they found it even more difficult to get credit compared to their male counterpart.

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