Nice writing!

 

Just my tow cents:

but you are suggested use a dictionary  --> but you are suggested to use a dictionary ?

one commonly word --> one commonly word

Few passerbys give him the money. A young lady gave him a coin, glanced at the sign, then changed the sign to "It is a beautiful day and I can't see it", and afterward the money pours.

--> inconsistent tenses?

gtow --> typo: grow ?