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来源: 2011-09-30 16:58:30 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

Although New York is a saint city for American stage and movie stars, the Chinese popular network star decided to work in a nail salon in Brooklyn that outside of New York downtown area in order to avoid the public critics from China.



saint city -> 可考虑换别的词.


network -> internet


decided -> has decided


that outside ->没有谓语


critics -> criticism