回复：my trial

来源: 于 2011-09-28 18:22:49 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

missed the race due to mess in communication and traffic -> due to the communication and traffic mess. 

so called a misplay Olymic -> 这个修饰词用逗号隔开放在句未,好象结构有问题. 用括号括起来放在1996 Atlanta Olympics后,或用联词和前一句接会好些.