给本地校董写了封请愿书，哪位帮忙给改改，谢谢了

Petition to the Edmonton Public School Board

 

We, the undersigned residents of Southwest of Edmonton, draw the attention of Edmonton Public School Board to establish additional Chinese – English Bilingual Programs in an elementary school and a junior high school which have the potential qualification and are located in Southeast area. The Chinese Community in southwest is growing very fast, and the needs of more Chinese – English Bilingual Programs to support our children’s Mandarin Chinese learning become more and more important and urgent.