回复：翻译听写 作业 - 很不好翻， 搞不对时态

来源: 于 2011-08-25 21:42:22 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

 

 

It seems there are too many running sentences.

 I feel most of your senteces in the translation need to devided into multiple sentences or be separated with appropriate conjunt words.