A very nice translation!

来源: 于 2011-08-09 05:15:19 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

1. Would "comparable to" sound better than "comparable with" (?)

2.  "the arteries and veins that transfer blood that carries oxygen and nutrition" - how about "the arteries and veins that transfer blood containing oxygen and nutrition"