回复：七夕快?middot;

来源: 于 2011-08-06 05:01:55 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

A very nice writing! I can always learn something from your writings.I just have a few small comments. 说错了请不要在意。

1. brought me occasionally uncomfortable self-consciousness - brought me occasionally a feeling of uncomfortable self-consciousness?

2. inside the marginalized immigrant community -  within the marginalized immigrant community?

3. But those days are history - But those days are a history?

4. I don’t dine alone - I don't dine alone anymore.