My 2 cents

185 "The", not "This" :)
187 h(ea)dlines
188 f(o)cuses
190 In(t)erview, although the "t" is silent, the tongue and lips should nevertheless be held in position as if the "t" was still there, 189 "International" is better
192 e(x)tra
195 "preferences", not sure, please double check