一点儿自己的correction：

来源: 于 2011-06-26 12:08:31 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

That's why I proposed to use your writing as "砖模" for us to practice and learn.-->for us to practice writing and learn from the process.

it wouldn't be anyone else' business--> else's