谢谢！您太自信了，请看。。。。。。

他们的：
A Song of the Palace.

Her tears are spent, but no dreams come.
She can hear the others singing through the night.
She has lost his love. Alone with her beauty,
She leans till dawn on her incense-pillow.

我的：
A SONG OF THE PALACE

Her tears are spent, but no dreams come，
She can hear the others singing through the night。
She has lost his love alone with her beauty，
She awake till morning with the incense-burner alone。

我7岁在美国的中文学校学中文，学校老师教我们唐诗英文的意思。