粗看了一下，觉得像是小学生写的断句的组合。比如说第一段：

Bruce is my former colleague. He holds clambake party every year at his private beach. The location is about 60 miles driving from Seattle.

也可以这样：

Every year, Bruce, a former colleague of mine, holds clambake party at his private beach which is located at about 60 miles （whatever direction）from Seattle.