三人行， 必有我师。。。帮咱改英文吧

咱老爹，私塾四年级，生前总唠叨这句老夫子的话。看了别人的回馈，觉得肯定有很多不足的地方，俺想在这里请教。另外，俺一直认为语法是咱强项。。。当年考两次托福： 一次出国前，在加拿大博士拿完了，要去滑铁卢念计算机，人家非得让咱考托福，就没复习又考了一次，语法都是满分啊。。。。不过，真羡慕现在的年轻人，英文说的真好啊。

帮咱改改吧，提前致谢（发在这里是因为原帖在这里。并且，这里的流量真大）

 

 

Bruce is my former colleague. He holds clambake party every year at his private beach. The location is about 60 miles driving from Seattle.

 
His father started this tradition dozens of years ago. He keeps it alive up to this year.

 
I have attended the party several times. Occasionally I brought my friends with me. There are many people at the party.
 

 
Many tasty foods by the attendees!
 

 
Various drinkings including many spirited ones.
 

 
People brought kayaks. Kids love playing it on the water!
 

 
Some love singing. Particularly, they would sing until very late at night. This year the California Hotel was my favorite...some others were not familiar to me.
 

 
Preparing the clams.
 

 
There are five big buckets of clams for the party each time. Every one can get as much as he/she wants.
 

 
I was enjoying the clams.

 
Drinking Beer with the clams is the best.

 
Ladies were all smiling with the delicious foods.

 
Sunset on the cove.

 
Another picture of sunset.

 
Marshmallow on the bonfire.

 
Camping overnight.

 
Breakfast was also very enjoyable.

 
One can dig the clams on the beach for taking home.

 
These were by my family.

You might wonder that Bruce must be rich...here is Seattle, home to the richest people like Bill Gates and Jeff Bezos. In fact, he is just a software engineer like me. I ever said to him that if he developed the place, he might get quite bit of earning. However, he said he just wanted to keep the beach as it is. This is good to the environment and he can have the clambake party ever year for many years to come.

 
Unforgettable beach like Eden. Look forward to the next year's party.