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五岭逶迤腾细浪,金沙浪拍云崖暖/重字
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金沙水拍,没有重字,老毛后来听了建议,改了。
-南方道主-
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09/09/2025 postreply
13:08:44
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重字有什么关系,崔颢那首《黄鹤楼》,一开头儿上来就是仨黄鹤,那不照样儿,唐人七律诗,当以此为第一?
-走资派还在走-
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09/09/2025 postreply
22:48:55
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