1) 把你写的放到MSWord里去检查拼写和语法错误。2)第一段不用写。
3)你出庭是为什么?
如果是我,估计就这么几句:
Your Honor,
It was snowing. I was on a slope. I drove very slow and carefully. Still, when I tried to break, it failed. Considering I did not have any previous traffic violation, please waive the fine and dismiss the ticket.
Thank you, Sir.