【一起民谣滚】【民谣】写一首英文歌 “ Are You Ready"

 

Baby, are you ready
Let's climb the mountains,
 While you stand by me.
Baby, are you ready
Let's touch the waves 
Let's go to see the sea
Baby, I miss your smile
Like whispering wind, you sent to me.

Baby, as we promised
Don't be sad, don't hold your tears
I know I am a fool
But I know you are my world
If you bled
I bleed the same
If you're scared
I am on my way.

Baby, are you ready
Let's walk in the clouds,
 Touching the dream
Baby, are you ready
Let me hold your hands
Say I love you

 

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• 沙发赞！ -天山晨- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:06:17

• 支持原创，赞弹唱，花∠※花∠※花 -琥珀之泪- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:23:10

• 挖了个赛，上山，下海，入云端，浪漫柔情的护花使者！欲哥好棒的原创！ -无问东西- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:40:12

• 好听！ -高尔吉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 09:52:18

• 自己写的？very能干！唱得也好，支持！ -睫毛弯弯2021- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 10:30:06

• 厉害了欲哥！ -zqy68- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 10:50:52

• 占位 -老地雷- ♀ (119 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 11:05:15

• 哇，多情的欲哥，，，这个作品真棒！好听极了！ -才歌- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 11:24:02

• 唱给谁的啊。 -玩票- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 11:44:25

• 哎哟，这首真得感觉很成熟，再让老美critique一下有几处的发音真是一首非常棒的歌 -老地雷- ♀ (56 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 13:06:06

• 感动！真挚细腻，大赞精品原创！ -Ha65494- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 13:13:40

• 大卫开始创作E歌了，词曲唱俱佳！ -FuRongLi- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 14:43:35

• 哇！太牛了！为原创喝彩! 真好听呀！ -碧蓝天- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:13:47