小孩子写长篇有时候就是流水账，LZ建议写短的其实是对的，好好写一篇短的比哗哗哗一路写好。

来源: -百科- 于 2019-02-25 19:25:41 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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