这篇读了，觉得文字需要润色，多一点情感，生动。写作就是zhe样，可以只勾画轮廓，也可以写出沙石的细，形状和色彩来。

来源: 6thsense 于 2023-07-26 16:38:26 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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